Reviews for tempting fate on a sunday afternoon
crimsonfirefly27 chapter 1 . 1/1/2007
i wonder if he still tastes like dreaming, too...

i love this.
hoowdoideletethisaccount chapter 1 . 1/20/2006
That's very mournful. Something in it haunts.
falling on deaf ears chapter 1 . 10/17/2005
'Scuse me going into English-teacher mode, but that is definitely some of your best work. Short and bittersweet, and it conveys so much in the small amount of space it takes up. Lovely job.

by His blood chapter 1 . 9/16/2005
this was excellent. short, but it captured the beauty of a single moment in strong and beautiful words. eloquent and very powerful. kudos, please keep writing.
account not in use chapter 1 . 9/13/2005
oh, wow. very beautiful, it's so honestly (almost) bitter
smile persephone chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
This is lovely. It seems so heartfelt and honest, and beautiful because of that. The imagery seems so lifelike. Something about 'two' grabs my attention more than 'one'.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
Very nice.
pneumothorax chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
A strong scene for a short piece in 'one'. I like the last half of 'two' rather than the first part. The consequences unrendering seems a little static or .. wooden.
lackluster chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
it seems so honest and just beautiful. i love the last stanza.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
gorgeous writing. the whole thing is so peaceful & divine. I love the second line.

~* noelle
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
Aganizingly honest, and beautiful. I loved it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.