|Reviews for tempting fate on a sunday afternoon|
| crimsonfirefly27 chapter 1 . 1/1/2007
i wonder if he still tastes like dreaming, too...
i love this.
| hoowdoideletethisaccount chapter 1 . 1/20/2006
That's very mournful. Something in it haunts.
| falling on deaf ears chapter 1 . 10/17/2005
'Scuse me going into English-teacher mode, but that is definitely some of your best work. Short and bittersweet, and it conveys so much in the small amount of space it takes up. Lovely job.
| by His blood chapter 1 . 9/16/2005
this was excellent. short, but it captured the beauty of a single moment in strong and beautiful words. eloquent and very powerful. kudos, please keep writing.
| account not in use chapter 1 . 9/13/2005
oh, wow. very beautiful, it's so honestly (almost) bitter
| smile persephone chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
This is lovely. It seems so heartfelt and honest, and beautiful because of that. The imagery seems so lifelike. Something about 'two' grabs my attention more than 'one'.
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
| pneumothorax chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
A strong scene for a short piece in 'one'. I like the last half of 'two' rather than the first part. The consequences unrendering seems a little static or .. wooden.
| lackluster chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
it seems so honest and just beautiful. i love the last stanza.
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
gorgeous writing. the whole thing is so peaceful & divine. I love the second line.
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
Aganizingly honest, and beautiful. I loved it, keep up the good work.