|Reviews for Adam|
| Kairi YaoiGirl chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
You write pretty well and I have to say that when I started to read, I could not stop until the end! :P
Anyway, I just wanted to say that, those people who call you 'fag' and all are just assholes! It doesn't matter if you like guys, that's not their problem! Love is love and being attracted to someone of the same gender is not the end of the world! I hate homophobes, just like my whole family (And trust me it's not easy to live with people like that.) I really hate it when people talk about gays in such a disgusted way and all I want to do is go right up to their faces and punch them so hard they become disfigured...
So anyway... I have to say that I already like you just by reading this... :P
| A chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
I admit that I didn't read every single word you wrote - I skipped here and there - but I liked what I did read. I think a lot of people need to get over their dislike, fear or whatever it is they feel towards homosexual people - male or female. Haha, the chances are you'll probably go to Hell for a whole slew of OTHER things rather than just for liking another person of the same sex. BOOZE WERE MADE FOR A REASON, and it wasn't to get the Barney song out of peoples' heads, let me tell you. ;D
"OMG! GAY PERSON! DISEASE! DISEASE! QUARANTINE IT! WHERE'S BUSH TO THINK IT'S CONTAGIOUS?" I think...?
Otherwise, I liked it; it was strong - informatively so. Might you be interested in being introduced to italics? Or, perhaps if you've already met, going on a treasure hunt to find them (they tend to run away... a lot). I promise there'll be good clues. And pirates. You can't have a treasure hunt without pirates.
Anyways, thank you for the read and another opinion to ponder on.
| Banane chapter 1 . 5/2/2006
Hiya! It's me, Flame. I agree completely with your entire point! *waves rainbow flag* W00t!
| brevis chapter 1 . 11/18/2005
I liked this. The writing's good, and you expressed your thoughts well. More people need to believe what you're saying. I'm straight, but I pride myself on being a tolerant person. After all, a marriage is a marriage-whether it's a guy and guy or a girl and a girl or a guy and girl...what does it matter?
"I snort when I laugh and I hate it." Boy, do i identify.
| Bookworm12-8-90 chapter 1 . 10/15/2005
You tell 'em, Adam, you tell 'em...
| Bob chapter 1 . 10/10/2005
I missed you when i wasn't on aspenda! and your writing has way improved. is this all you, or do you have someone checking over your stuff? Anway, great job.
*hunts down evil homophobes who bashed Adam*
and the goat quote is way cool.
| InSilverShadows chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
You go, Adam... you tell them. We luff ya, Adam!
| Bowling Beaver chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
I think you sound like a nice guy. I don't care if you are gay. My mom is a priest and she doesn't think people go to hell for being gay. I don't either.
-Emma from Maplewood, NJ
| Throgmorten chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
Yay Adam! You rawk, man.
| M.U.O chapter 1 . 9/27/2005
And I respect you for it. Peace.
-Saluvril Andromeda Lunaris
| Toni Berthelette chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
aw I really like this. I'm very religious, so at first I was kinda against gay marriage...then my religion teacher said that there was nothing wrong with it. She said that God created people that way etc...very well written, I really liked this )
| lapleinelune chapter 1 . 9/14/2005
First off, I applaud you for daring to come out like this. I am a bisexual girl myself, and I know how you feel.
Secondly, this should really be on your blog or website. Sorry, I am picky when it comes to people posting stuff where it doesn't belong - essay section is for essays, thank you!
Now, if you really want me to review your article, I'd say it is quite well written, and it makes a good impact on the reader about gay people.
Go Gay pride!
| Kaiwaf chapter 1 . 9/13/2005
Hah. I find your tone perfectly polite, if a little frayed from having to put up with such. . .and I was able to get through it without losing interest. You are indeed quite a decent writer. Hmm. . .different, but I like it. Mayhaps I'm mellowing. . .
| Moonjava chapter 1 . 9/13/2005
Oh, I very much like this. It's very refreshing and inspiring. You're a pretty good writer. I am bisexual and I have a learning disability my self. So this really hit home for me. My only comment. Is that this reads more like a biography to me. Rather then an essay. However, that's just what I think.
I don't really care if someone tells me 'I'm going to hell'. Or 'Screw you FAG'. I don't really even believe in heaven or hell (I'm Pagan my self.) So that really doesn't bother me. I just try to blow it all off and make fun of every thing (when I can.)
Good writing though.
| Dayelle Ann chapter 1 . 9/13/2005
You know, this may sound cruel, or maybe freaky, but, I need a gay friend. Don't ask me why, I just do. I've got so many /diverse/ friends, and all I need is some gay friends.
I'm personally straight, and have no gay friends, but, I am totally for gay marriage, it doesn't matter if a guy wants to marry his male boyfriend, I'm totally for that, considering, many gay guys would probably have a better chance of getting married then I would... so, let'em... and that's just my opinion.