|Reviews for Grieving a Loved One before they have died|
| Coeur Sans Espoir chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
This is so sad. It reminds me of my grandmother and my mom's relationship with each other before my grandmother died. My grandmother was in a hospice with breast cancer. The last words she said to my mom were "I love you" and then she died. A week later my mom recieved the papers saying she was disowned...
| mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
wow... so spiritual and makes me wonder too Awesome work!
| Martin Peterson chapter 1 . 9/16/2005
Interesting story told in an original fasion. Nicely done.
| dooley creel chapter 1 . 9/13/2005
so personal, it's moving of course, and beautifully written, the form has an innate succinct Zen quality, but to your full credit, you handle it well. dc
| Light Lena chapter 1 . 9/13/2005
A very sad haiku, i really love it cause it's how many migth actually feel or do. Keep up your writing.
| ADSpencer chapter 1 . 9/13/2005
You did a wonderful job. This is so sad. I envision every scene.