Reviews for Grieving a Loved One before they have died
Coeur Sans Espoir chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
This is so sad. It reminds me of my grandmother and my mom's relationship with each other before my grandmother died. My grandmother was in a hospice with breast cancer. The last words she said to my mom were "I love you" and then she died. A week later my mom recieved the papers saying she was disowned...
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
wow... so spiritual and makes me wonder too Awesome work!

keep writing!
Martin Peterson chapter 1 . 9/16/2005
Interesting story told in an original fasion. Nicely done.

Matt
dooley creel chapter 1 . 9/13/2005
so personal, it's moving of course, and beautifully written, the form has an innate succinct Zen quality, but to your full credit, you handle it well. dc
Light Lena chapter 1 . 9/13/2005
A very sad haiku, i really love it cause it's how many migth actually feel or do. Keep up your writing.
ADSpencer chapter 1 . 9/13/2005
You did a wonderful job. This is so sad. I envision every scene.