Reviews for tycheSPLIT
HauntedMisery chapter 1 . 10/15/2005
I like this, great work!
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 10/3/2005
like a lover chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
gorgeous and dreamy and flawless and faraway. dangerous combination.

love love love.
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 9/16/2005
wow~~ such profound meaning to unveil~

keep writing!
lackluster chapter 1 . 9/15/2005

i love the images it brings up.
twenty-second seduction chapter 1 . 9/14/2005
oh is perfection
Sagaciouspnay chapter 1 . 9/14/2005
Aw this is very sweet. you're very clever writing in such an elegant but coded manner. Excellent job!

-Please review some of my recent poems-[[SagaciousPnay]]
GypsyMothra chapter 1 . 9/14/2005
Fantastic. I loved the entire thing. Beautiful. I must say, I loved "& she touches her third eye with a smile, cause it's burning bright (& she knows the reasons why)" You captured everything nicely and I love your wording. It was beautiful.
not sure yet chapter 1 . 9/13/2005
prettyful, i like it
evm chapter 1 . 9/13/2005
Love! Especially, ' she clamps her eyes shut & pools the wishmagic against her lids.'
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 9/13/2005
such a different & style, no? :)

I love it. the whole thing sends such pleasent tingles down my spine and inspires me so greatly. *steals this and runs* can I say much more? you have talent, I steal plan on stealing it. shows how enviousselfish I am of you. your poetry is godly.

~* noelle
Nothing Profound chapter 1 . 9/13/2005
Oh, beautiful.
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 9/13/2005
& she touches her third eye with a smile, cause it's burning bright-This is really a "poets" poem (or to me it is) its like writers live within their third eye, they use it just as much as their everyday sight and its always burning bright with some kind of art form.

Much love,Juliet.