Reviews for Shuffled Cards
miss understanding chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
ha ha, shuffling cards. I can't shuffle or they fly all over the place. I'm not a fond player of 52 pick-up. You did a good job. It's hard to write in a narrative that isn't your own voice. One of the difficulties in the past of writers. Creating characters unlike them. Good job. TOodles! Choco
eldrin chapter 1 . 9/13/2005
An interesting effect here. The simple imagery is just enough to captivate me.