Reviews for If
kippinator chapter 1 . 11/11/2006
Very good. Discusses a point I've always wondered about: why can relationships never forget their pasts? You may have sparked something in me, I can almost see my next poem brewing.

(I'm on a romantic language keyboard right now and it just took me about five minutes to type that.)

Btw, thanks for reviewing my stuff.
thebigbadwolf chapter 1 . 11/1/2005
nicely strung together. i like it. ;0
my failure chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
lovely
ronshaberry chapter 1 . 9/14/2005
I like this. It lingers... somewhat. There seems to be a lot of thought put into this, and I love your last two lines. Reminds me of Kenshin. Um, forget I typed that.
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 9/14/2005
Beautiful poem you exoressed your emotions so well

keep writing!
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 9/13/2005
I love the rawness of this; it just feels like the words literally sliped off of your soul like water and onto the page, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.
Death2Smilee chapter 1 . 9/13/2005
whoa awesome. you did a really great job. keep it up.