Reviews for Dawn
EmbersAblaze-IgnitedIcicle chapter 1 . 9/15/2005
Yes, good move taking haiku of of the simply nature theme, although sex, passion, and soul consuming love are VERY natural.

you kind of prove that, through haiku!

Haberdasher chapter 1 . 9/14/2005
hmm...i can taste the anticipation! -the Lady Elaine
unemployed writer chapter 1 . 9/14/2005
Not much good coming out in the realm of haiku nowadays, but this is very good. Keep on the right track and you could be in my place some day.
Maisha Mafuriko chapter 1 . 9/14/2005
I like this writing...

Kinda liken as to the nowness of time *for me* at the edge of go in the direction of one's sense of being...