Reviews for Will: I
angelicprotection chapter 1 . 11/12/2005
I got out of this altho i think its way off is the person's whose point of view this is from is afraid of being cast away out of her lover's grace.
BJ Worth chapter 1 . 11/2/2005
m, beautiful. I love the passion and the uncertainty
Shippo-kun347 chapter 1 . 10/18/2005
Thankx 4 reviewing 4 my poem Deep Cutter. I really liked your poem. I have another poem called Thorns of A Rose. Check it out if you want to.
REDheshy chapter 1 . 10/15/2005
Beautiful. It was amazing. I am going to read the other two.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
Ecstacy mixed with the negative future, powerful.
Starlight Maiden chapter 1 . 9/29/2005
The imagery in this is absolutely wonderful...it's so emotional too...
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/20/2005
beautiful & very sad... I like it a lot.. one of your bests I would say
not sure yet chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
o, that was absolutely beautiful and sad, excellent imagery and very emotional, i have absolutely nothing useful to say, i really loved this though, beautifully done
Paramour-ing chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
Your work is like a painting; stained glass etched on a window that I can see into but also can see myself reflected in.
in theory chapter 1 . 9/17/2005
There is so much about this that I fell in love with. The main thing I should mention is your format; you always arrange your words with flawless, practiced precision. This time, they seemed to me to slip from the screen, they tumbled after each other in a silken slide. Gorgeous. Great work Juliet.
AlwaysAmberella chapter 1 . 9/16/2005
I...am, more speechless than ever before, stunned, amazed, transfixed. I can't get enough.

Solo.
GeorgeBailey chapter 1 . 9/16/2005
Again, I haven't read enough of your work, but this is great. I love this line. "He hands my love back to me, wrapped in a torn veil". This is powerful stuff. Never stop writing. Georgebailey
SinEe chapter 1 . 9/15/2005
Extremely nice poem! It is totally awesome and great! Full of emotions..
EmbersAblaze-IgnitedIcicle chapter 1 . 9/15/2005
My heart is like a falling star that hits as a meteor shower.

I can relate. Even to his "name".
InuSaysLeGasp chapter 1 . 9/15/2005
The repitition here was wonderfuly spaced and the perpetual comparision to the evening made me feel oh so floaty.

Favourite Line(s): "after all there was still pink in the sky when I left."
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