Reviews for The Briar Patch |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Its funny how i was watching SUPERNATURAL, and the song "You Sexy Thing" played in the show in a bar. It reminded me of when Sheldon played it. I was like: woah wtf, deja vu xD. This is honestly my favorite story...made me cry a lot. Read it once already. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I cried reading the previous chapter and finally glad it ended nicely c: |
![]() ![]() Hey I understand that Sheldon is extremely shy. But it's killing to hear him refer to himself as a 'kid' at 17. 17 is a time around where we think we are invisible and oh so 'grown up'. I just find it a little strange. |
![]() ![]() LOVED, loved this story...fasinating setting, beautiful story, wonderful characters, Takoda and Sheldon..wow! Armand and Destin making their cameo appearance very sweet, missed them. You are an awesome writer, don't stop writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOLLOLLOLLOLLOL I LOVE how you snuck Destin and Armand into the story :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() FINALLY! I LOVE Takoda's family and Sheldon's friends! They're wonderful! I feel bad about what happened to CJ though...And I was kinda hoping you would write something about Sheldon's uncle and Kelly. Overall though, this is a very entertaining story. Sheldon should stop his habit of running away from problems lol |
![]() ![]() and it was good... such a corny but amazing last line |
![]() ![]() I've already read this before, but I liked it so much that I'm reading all your stories for a second time. They're great. I've talked to you about these stories a few times before, but not recently, so I hope you're doing well |
![]() ![]() ![]() . .STORY! *applause* seriously though, bravo! one of the best stories ive ever read, on of my most favourites! gah i love it so much! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a powerful story. I really didnt know how you were going to pull it all back together in the end, but i have to say it was wonderful! I especially liked the Finding Heaven crossover, by the way, was this Armand and Destin after they traveled around for a while, after the whole Destin wants a baby thing? Was that a little foreshadow of Destin and Armand? |
![]() ![]() Loved this story - was terrific how you built up the angst - how you brought in Destin and Armand and even Dane - thank you so much . |
![]() ![]() Aw. I liked John, but apparently he's going to be the bad guy that gets Sheldon and Takoda together together. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! You really like your charachters! LOL. But thats not a bad thing! I just love how Destin seems to be a big charachter in most of your storys! Destin is probably my favorite charachter. Hes so SWEET! I did want to read more on what happened in those two years when he was away, but I can kinda guess, and I think I want to go back and read Finding Heaven and see if Shel is in there. Is he? I cant rememmber... Well anyway! I love your storys! Their wonderful and I hope you never stop writing! And update Spring Equinox soon, I like that story, and would love to see them have a happy ending, but am also sad that its ending... And Orion's Star, that one was fun! So KEEP WRITING! Your awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() very good!I loved it to pieces. The last chapters weren't really rushed per say, but I think you could develop what happened to Sheldon while he was with the new friends a little more to give it more of a sense of fullness also, here and there, are some proof reading errors, not many, mostly added letters/missing letters _ |
![]() ![]() Hey, I'm enjoying the story a bunch. However, in this chap in particular there are a lot of editing errors, groingroan...and a couple others. just thought i would mention it _ |