Wow. This is so, so incredible. So descriptive and passionate. The very last line seemed sort of thrown in there...I dunno...But I love it so much.

Powerful and passionate, I loved this, that curisoity (you really displayed it with interest and intensity) its like they always tell you not to look into the sun, but just by them telling you not to proves that you will just to spite them. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.