Reviews for orphan child
Rum Kitten chapter 1 . 9/27/2005
_ all of us somewhere have that child. I act like her all the time. I'm sorry you didn't get any reviews last time. heh.
Saeo chapter 1 . 9/15/2005
Aw, it's so sweet...I dunno why, but this poem really touches readers. The rhythym really brought it out too. Tssoe last lines really brought everything together. Perfecto. . Great job, I really liekd this.

Always, saeo
Life loving freak chapter 1 . 9/15/2005
HeyThis isnt really a humor poem, its more of an agnest poem, or a sad poem. It's good though!
Lovejoy chapter 1 . 9/15/2005
Maybe you got no reviews last time because no one read it, I thought this was an excellent poem. Not one I could relate to but one that I could still hear the emotions to. It flowed so elegantly too, good read!