|Reviews for Will: II|
| the.pink.life chapter 1 . 9/7/2006
"(I took his body/like a bullet/between my thighs.)" - Gah. *dies* This is perfection. This entire poem is just what you want love to be, or is it sex? (Haha, couldn't resist.) Wow. I loved this so much. Favoriting. Keep writing! :)
| Jezsh chapter 1 . 3/13/2006
So gorgeous. I love those one-word lines, like caught breaths.
| angelicprotection chapter 1 . 11/12/2005
wow. a secret love i enjoy your poems i love this series im off the the I
| Why chapter 1 . 10/26/2005
Why doesn't it have any sex in it? this sucks
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
| Caroline000 chapter 1 . 9/29/2005
Keep writting good poem!
| account not in use chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
you jusr wrote the moments between my favorite love and I perfectly, the moments we steal away fomr his girlfriend and the one who thinks I belong ot him...you have a beautiful, raw poem here, and I worship every letter.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/20/2005
awesome poem.. as always... very powerful.. very god mixture of sad and happy
| not sure yet chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
another very intense poem, i wish i had words, but i dont, excellent job
| Paramour-ing chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
Willie-Boy certainly is a lucky guy.
| in theory chapter 1 . 9/18/2005
"moan of morning," I loved that line. A very detailed and complex piece, throbbing with personal meaning yet offering a satisfying selection of other things that a reader can identify with. Great job.
| AlwaysAmberella chapter 1 . 9/16/2005
All of your work is always so intense, I love it.
P.S. please E-mail me sometime, for I too am from the State of Ever-Green maybe that could be why I am drawn to you. or it could be the poetry, but ya know, whatever.
| backseats on thursdays chapter 1 . 9/16/2005
As Always: Beautiful.
| SinEe chapter 1 . 9/15/2005
Definitely love is not all about sex.. Know what you really want and how you really feel..perhaps it will help.. Take some time to think about it! Anyway..a very reflective poem!
| EmbersAblaze-IgnitedIcicle chapter 1 . 9/15/2005
I don't care if sex isn't love.
I'd take his body like a bullet between my thighs, between my eyes, between the lies.
Ooh now I'm pissed off, and really horny.
PS really good review of naughtgreen's social pornography piece. Should I shamelessly "plug" both of these masterpieces, as well as my own? I think I just did. :)