Reviews for ink stains
sunday night sky chapter 1 . 12/22/2005
wow - i love it. amazing work.
st. maverick chapter 1 . 11/26/2005
I love the beginning - it sets the tone. You have a great talent, can just speak to the reader- channel something unsaid. Excellent.
addie pray chapter 1 . 11/12/2005
The voice in this was awesome.
wonderland is different now chapter 1 . 11/6/2005
wow, this is new, and cool. and i like
pornographic priestess chapter 1 . 10/19/2005
TRAGIC -i love the use of mythology in here -and the metaphors! and similies! and minimalistic imagery! (oh my!)quite out of the ordinary and lovely.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
I love Ares. :)
Unready chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
HAHAH. nice, nice. I'm learning about mythology. andihate edith hamilton (the author of the goddamned book im studying right now. boy did zeus fuck a lot of people.
White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 9/25/2005
Wow...just wow.
stashedlover chapter 1 . 9/23/2005
fabulous! loved it (:
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/22/2005
i like the first line & the jerry sprionger too.. its very true.. nice job.. cool formatting as always
account not in use chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
wow. I adore mythology, adn you hit the nail on the head. brilliant job.
ADSpencer chapter 1 . 9/20/2005
This is awesome. Mythology really is like Jerry Springer. I suppose that last stanza can be taken a few different ways. Oh, and you changed your name; that confused me...
a headless butterfly chapter 1 . 9/20/2005
love it. :D hilarious. "so, so like, d. she is in love:" i love the first line and the oc! seth is so hysterical. and that line just captures so succintly almost all the girls in my school HAHA. and the whole cynical last bit. great lines.
LemonFlats chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
GAH! I went to go check out your profile, and was extremely confused, to say the least. But then, I get confused a lot, so it was really no big deal )

"so, so like, d." Can you say "Valley Girl?" XD Excellence.

"zeus zeus zeus zeus. ZEUS" Reminds me of teenage girls (*cough*) screaming celebrities' names at events... XD

The whole last stanza- Describes Zeus as well as I remember him (ie, all I remember is his frivolity (is that a word? Well, it is now) with women).

And, finally, my favorite line: "( mythology is so damn jerry-springer)" Heck yes. And, if you're a shameless Seth junkie like I am, it's a lot like the OC too. *Sighs*

You've got me sitting here and blanking out at the computer screen, with memories of a summer of the Iliad and some mythology book running through my head.
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 9/17/2005
This poem was amusing...nice work!
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