Reviews for Guilt
lovelikeamixtape chapter 1 . 9/24/2005
such a good definition of guilt. the title fits so perfectly. you did an amazing job of putting this into words.
PessimisticOptimism chapter 1 . 9/22/2005
It's beautiful...you're an awesome by the way. Thank you for the criticism. that was basically what I was looking for when I posted the first chapter.
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
wow... i love the intensity of the imagery and the raw sense of emotion Great job!

keep writing!
lackluster chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
so vivid! it's beauty at it's ugliest, which is conveyed so well. i love it.
smile persephone chapter 1 . 9/17/2005
"Sweat-drenched hair curling like a/Renaissance painting" - I love the imagery of this, such a lovely simile. The imagery of it all, actually, is beautiful. Nicely done.