Reviews for Tangled
JC Peters chapter 13 . 3/11/2008
I love love/hate relationships...if you couldn't tell. HA, thanks for the review!

And btw amazing title choice, quite perfect.

Essie chapter 1 . 3/8/2008
Woa, sorry to hear that ur not feeling well. get better soon. Eat lots of fruit!

Anyway, at least we got a little more Adonis! Even tho it's so obious he's a jackass there's just something just so wounded puppy dog about him that i just want to hug him and say 'poor baby' in which case he would probably bite me at the jugular and claw my face off... but still, more adonis pls. )
lolipop chapter 13 . 3/5/2008
ani chapter 2 . 3/3/2008
uh, didn't mean to end the rewiev there, well, where was I? Ahh yes, I have no idea what those could be... blah, I guess I can't strech this out any longer, just can't wait to read more
ani chapter 1 . 3/3/2008
Well this was interesting...

Jade huh? I should've realized...

God I just hope Tess will go through with it and actually tell Cam, seriously she need to grow a backbone...

And now I really wanna know what's up with Reggie... Guess it has something to do with Adonis right? And I suppose Cam too, but yeah, I guess I just have to wait to find out :)

Oh and those pills, well... I don't really believe those are antidepressants, I mean seriously, there are way too many stories with depressive, vulnerable guys (don't mean to be rude or anything). Hum, maybe viagra? Haahahaha that would be way to weird :P

Huhh, maybe he has insomania ya know? Actually I have no idea
Isabelle chapter 13 . 3/1/2008
ahh, more T/A action, hot, hot, hot. I hope they're's gonna be a lot more in the next chapter. because it's like you skip interaction with them every other chapter. Hopefully, they're be a lot next time, hm. Adonis is so hot for Tess. He wants her, well her body at least.

cant wait for the next chapter.

SadHappyFace chapter 13 . 3/1/2008
I liked how this chapter had more T/A action. We could all use more of that. They have lots of chemistry. It's really cool. Pretty please update soon. You have all your devoted readers sitting on the edge of their chairs waiting for you!
falceto chapter 13 . 2/29/2008 soon. REAL SOON.
dudeyourmom chapter 13 . 2/29/2008
dude update!
Nick Wright chapter 13 . 2/27/2008
Well, I really liked this chapter. It's good to see Tess as the courageous type once in a while. _

I love the Irish jokes, as well-I have a friend who's Irish and this is precisely the sort of dialog we would have if he were at a party: continually dropping Irish-references. I mean, that's not a big thing in your story but I think it's a nice and realistic detail that kinda made the story a bit more... personal, I guess?

I eagerly await your next installment-and you have actually inspired me to start writing again (I read 30 Days in one sitting and just had to read this one and then when I was out of reading material I had to write!).
jenni chapter 12 . 2/27/2008
update! please update soon, you just left us on a cliffhanger! come on dude, please update soon!

i'll pray to the magical writing gods i swear.

just update son!
turnip-head chapter 13 . 2/26/2008
Hi, a little bit random but just a quick message to let you know that I think your writing is fantastic. Ive never written a review before, but I just felt compelled to let you know how talented I think you are. I stumbled across your stories a few days ago and read them both through, in one go (and yes it did take me ages). Hands down best stories ive read on FP so far. I read chapter 13 of tangled before i went to work this morning and honestly its been on my mind all day! I could ramble on for pages about this but i wont, ill simply say in relevance to this story that I think the thing I love most about it is the characterisation. You write them brilliantly, and I honestly think im in love with Adonis (well as love as you can be with a fictional character) and the chemistry between himself and Tess. You can literally feel it when youre reading it. Great job. Enough babbling now. Cant wait for your next update!

ps can you tell i love your writing? haha im such a nerd.
Tamtam chapter 13 . 2/26/2008
really good chapter! does Adonis play any sports for the college, I thought I read something about soccer, but then again i could be imagining it, lol.
sara chapter 13 . 2/26/2008
Ok First things first, I had an amazing review for you, it was the shit, and when I submited it, it told me that fiction press was not working or something like that. I was so pissed, my review was 3/4 of a page almost. Anyways I'll try to rack my brain for all of the things I talked about in the other review.

Moving on to more important things.

Wow, this chapter gave away a lot of information. Hm, we see another side of Cameron. He just ignored Tessa when she really wanted to dance with him and basically brushed it off as nothing. But, I guess he redeemed himself when he apoligized to her. But this shows that he's not that much of a prince no matter how much he makes himself out to be. I feel that he easily falls under peer pressure. And also, Tessa was disappointed when he didn't respond back dirtly. Hmm, so early in a relationship and shes already disappointed? No, I do not sense easy sailings. Perhaps she wants someone more manly, like Adonis perhaps? Well, it's in the back of subconscious anyways. OH! Adonis has emotions after all? Wow, I'm glad that you finally delved a fraction of a bit deeper into his character. It's great to see smooth, elequent main character a little frazzled. Adonis had a threesome? Woah baby, thats one person too many. Also it's kind of dirty... lol. I feel bad for Morgan because it really seemed that she wanted to get to know him. Maybe he'll listen to Tessandra and redeem himself with Morgan. Oh, Adonis put the moves on Tessa. So can we safely say that Adonis has acknowledged that he is hot for Tessa? Also, it seems like the tension has dropped considerably between them. At least half of it had to be sexual tension. Until Tessa, hit a nerve it seemed like Adonis was enjoying arguing with her or perhaps he always liked to argue with her. I know he's still toying with her. But, at least she managed to one-up him, first by telling him, that she was going to tell Cam second when she found the medication. Hmm. Anti-depressants? Seems likely. Can't wait for you're next update. So get on it! lol.


p.s. - as for the hints on where cam is going, maybe Paris because he misses his sister? Just a guess.
Randomisation chapter 13 . 2/25/2008
i love this story! really great! please continue! i kind of like a strange way...
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