Reviews for Okay
TheDJ chapter 1 . 6/8/2007
This is brilliant. Well done mate, it's absolutely fantastic poem. I feel lucky just to have read it. Fantastic work - TheDJ.
Violent.Delights chapter 1 . 2/3/2007
This was really effective and wonderful. I love the way you write, the repetition was used really well and added immensely to the whole thing, emphasising just the right points. Keep writing!
Gorgeous Courage chapter 1 . 10/27/2006
Oh, wow. Awesome. It's described so well, I could see it happening in my mind. :-)

Randi
pieces of art chapter 1 . 9/23/2006
That poem was genius. You honestly touched me right inside. Learn this, the greatest compliment you can get from me is "I wish I wrote that", and that's how I feel. God bless you and never stop writing.
write25 chapter 1 . 7/22/2006
Loved that. the repetition was well used, and not in a way that it felt like a template was placed down and filled in for each section. good work. mariah
write25 chapter 1 . 7/22/2006
Loved that. the repetition was well used, and not in a way that it felt like a template was placed down and filled in for each section. good work. mariah
EmptyNight chapter 1 . 4/26/2006
i love your writing...end of story
account not in use chapter 1 . 1/9/2006
this was beautiful, pain and heartbreak, acceptance and loss.
Mike James Watson chapter 1 . 11/6/2005
i liked this poem alot. keep it up
Moonjava chapter 1 . 9/27/2005
Wow, this is really powerful. I don't really know what else to say other then that.
Antony At Last chapter 1 . 9/18/2005
I like the repitition, it lulls me, makes me sink into the poems and see every moment you describe, and creates a seemingly unanimous divide in my mind where my own imaginings and your words blend, and I feel as if I understand your emotions when I've never experienced this.
MagdalenaSnow chapter 1 . 9/16/2005
wow.. i.. wow.

i absolutely love this, keep it up!