Before you go crazy and say "not her again!" I just forgot to mention in my last review that I was slightly sad you made Cristy not nice (well, she just seemed not-nice in her first entrance) because if Jonas ends up really straight and after a round of angst Andrew finds that his true love is actually Troy... then Jonas will need a pretty perfect girl to fall onto... because to turn Andrew down you really need a pretty perfect girl...

Ok, not my two reviews combined are almost as long as your chapter... so I'll shutup now.

But oh-UPDATE SOON!

/fallenfantasist

Usually, when a story has a bunch of semi-main characters, it's nearly impossible for me to remember who's who, but in this, you've made it so easy. For some reason, all the names match their corresponding personalities so well! I find Gary to be an absolute DOLL. I adore his interactions with Harris. Harris with his "asthma attacks", haha, always put a smile on my face. But for soem reason... I dont see the spark in Jonas. He seems to ideal pretty golden boy... and he's so clueless! Oddly enough, I keep getting these vibes that Troy has a majoy crush on either Jonas or Andrew, but I cant pinpoint which one. I'm excited to see the twists and turns you have in this story for Andrew. Oh, speaking of Andrew... /it wouldn’t be the first time I’d dreamed I had friends/ GAH Andrew just breaks my heart. I mean, WHAT HAPPENED in Chicago to think so little of himself. It's like he doesnt think he's worth anything... my heart is beaten every time I read one of his little honestly convinced monologues about how he's too stupid, too looserish, too whatever. And that scene where Andrew was just sitting there waiting for Jonas to break his heart by asking to borrow a pencil or paper for being nice to him yesterday... Ah. And I just know that if one of the boys on accident do something to hurt Andrew... he'll be DEVASTATED. ::cringes:: It hurts just to think about it.

And now I feel all silly about getting all emotional about your story, even though it is amazing, because it's jsut a story and not real life... but the way you write makes it seem completely real life... so anyway, to end my ramblings and this terrifyingly long review... UPDATE SOON!

/fallenfantasist

I see Andrew definitely needs some friends... he has been way too long without. Couldn't even talk to Jonas, but I think that has something to do with the fact that, ahem, Andrew has a crush on him. .

No worries- I personally like long chapters, and I look forward to the next one! *goes and checks Chapter 2* Mm, I think that one's good as it is, but if you're going to remove anything, just make sure it won't be missed.

Such as if has Jonas in it. *tackles* X)

Heh. If you ever figure it out, tell me and I'll blackmail my local bookstore into making it!

Poor Andrew. He needs a hug so desperately. Besides, what's the difference between friendliness and being friends? Same diff to me!

i like this! _ so Andrew's got a crush on a boy who's in love with a human Barbie doll? got it. i just want to smack Jonas upside the head! gr! girls like that are never worth it. but Andrew is! _ Andrew's such a cutie pie! so sweet and awkward. _ i like Troy and Gary, too. they seem like pretty cool dudes. i really REALLY wanna know Harris' real name! what is it? please share the wealth! i'll give you a cookie! _ well, can't wait for the next chappie! update soon!

Mwahz- DNB

PS- poor, poor boy. i feel so sorry for poor little Andrew. :(

I'm glad you updated, I can't wait to learn more about Andrew. And there is no such thing as a chapter that's 'too long'. Feel free to wallow in the details.

Wow. The poor boy was so not used to people actually aknowledging him that it didn't even occur to him that he might actually be the one that was being called. He's so incredibly self concious. It's so...awsome for him, that he has friends for the first time in god knows how long. Andrew is so adorable.

Also, yeah, I love Harris. And Troy seems like an interesting character as well. I like how you really gave them all distinct personalities primarily through dialogue.

Hi, decided to go looking up your stories...

I'm quite glad I did! This is an awsome story. Wow.

Poor Andrew, wow. That boy just seems so abused. It's there in every thought that runs through his mind. He needs a hug. Jonas is awsome for helping him.

I really like your writing style, too; you have very vivid descriptions, it makes it easy to imagine the scene in my head.

It's also nice that you have long chapters, unlike *cough* me.

Off to go read the other chapters! Or actually, I might have to read them later, because I'm not allowed to use the computer at home right now and I have to leave my friend's house soon...

Oh, I love it. Nothing better than a pathetic geek figuring out that he's gay, then finding out that his crush is more into the cheerleader type. o.o Surprisingly common, that. Anyway, great job. _ I look forward to more. (Just for the record, you've done it. I WANT a chocolate explosion now. .

Good chapter. Andrew is especially cute in it, and I loved the thing you did with the mirrors. So that's Christy, huh? Wow. Andrew must be really gone on Jonas if he's going to help him with her. Troy was interesting in this chapter...so nice and mysterious at the same time. I like the way he reads Andrew. Hmm.

Glad I found this one. _ I like! That's so cute how Andrew's so smitten with Jonas. Poor guy, having to watch Jonas drool over that preppy blonde.

Bah. Blondes... ;P

Anyway, interesting story. I'm happy to see that Andrew's found some friends (even though it's just causing him more trouble.) Please update soon!

I love your characters. Please continue.

Hey! I'm really loving you fic so far! Andrew is just too cute... i hope someone falls for him, that'd be sweet can't wait for the next update! see ya!

Bwahaha. I have a prediction. Actually, I thought of it in chapter two. But I'm pretty sure of it now. 3

And aw, poor Andrew. ;-;

there was a point in there when i thought _Troy_ might be the gay one. he kinda almost sorta...you know. anyway, wouldn't that give the story a twist? *snorts* i think it'd be kinda funny. anyway, update soon...