Reviews for You Are Chinese Version
Iris AG chapter 1 . 1/23/2007
很不错的中文不过中文诗 更加常用恩

最后一句应该是 总 在 那里为我

加油哦!支持!︿ ︿
lynnicina chapter 1 . 7/12/2006 it translated using any online language tool? Cos it doesn't sound like real Chinese...
Jay-Ling chapter 1 . 1/29/2006
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Pimpled Boy chapter 1 . 12/31/2005
I think your translation should be more of:你,总在我身边。你,是我的一切。你看见,我的优点。你,有夏天的芬芳。你,好像小鸟歌唱。你,永远在我身边。This, of course, is not an example of a chinese literary work. It's just a direct translation from your English poem "You Are".
Agatha chapter 1 . 9/25/2005
0_0...I wish I knew what it said?
sarah1491 chapter 1 . 9/20/2005
Haha, but does it make sense? :P I bet it doesn't... _
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 9/18/2005
wow~~ i can actually read it lol~ very pretty and sweet~

keep writing!