Reviews for Hold On
Phoenix II chapter 4 . 4/1/2007
Life of's a damn odd book. I've never read any of the others, but...

yeah...just wanted to make that comment. sorry.
total vintage chapter 6 . 1/11/2007
Why hello fellow San Antonian! I'm from SA too! How weird/cool is that? It's rare to find someone on here whose from SA. lol Anyways I just have to say that I thnk your story is beautiful! (You almost even made me cry at some points)It's very and I mean VERY well done. You have such powerful writing it's amazing. I have enjoyed reading the story and I can not wait for the next chapter. Please update soon, and if you can, check out my story. It's definately not as good as yours cause yours is just wow. And just to let you know, I'm going to be adding you to my favorites.

Update soon,

Tay chapter 6 . 12/21/2005
I Love This. It is the best thing i have read on fiction press. Please update soon, I can't wait any longer!
K. T. Wood chapter 6 . 12/13/2005
Wow. That was so sweet. I adored it. Very sad though...Loved it anyway. You're awesome.
Kiyuna chapter 6 . 12/4/2005
Aw! that's so beautiful and romantic.. and yet.. gah.. something irritates me a bit about having a person relive their most traumatizing moment and then kissing them, kinda melodramatic/adhd
ddz008 chapter 6 . 12/3/2005
Aw! It was so cute! They're so sweet! I love them! :DGreat story!I hope you keep writing!

:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
Ashley chapter 6 . 12/3/2005
aww that was so unbelievably cute. I can't wait to see what happens next.
RFW'N-Counting chapter 6 . 12/3/2005
Wow. It's been a whie. But I must say, the wait was worth it. This is by far the best chapter yet. I squealled when they kissed! I can't wait for more. There will be more right?
AngleOnParade chapter 6 . 12/3/2005
Yes Yes Yes! You finally updated! what took you so long? It was great. I LOVED it. Man, don't wait forever to post your next chapter. That was almost torture!
azinineMC chapter 6 . 12/3/2005
Aw... *heart heart heart* That was just so damn sweet! *cooes* I'm feeling quite nostalgic too due to the kiss... *squeal* Now the question is... Would Blake come out of the closet for the sake of Caleb? Oh... You better update faster with Chapter seven! Or else I'll hunt you down and bite you! _ And I meant it! *insane cackle*
PCPunk chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
My GOD! Do you think it took you long enough. I thought you had given up on the story all together. I must say though, the wait was worth it. That chapter was AMAZING! I loved how you set up the entire park sence. And the ending, with the snow. Beautiful. Please don't make us wait months before you post the next chapter!
pink raine chapter 5 . 11/24/2005
i was rather disappointed when i got to chapter5. there was no next button to press. it's going great. although i think u cud develop caleb's lonliness and hurt a little more? he acts shy, and we know the reason, but it's not really connecting. but thaz all. everything else is cool.
Ink x Heart chapter 5 . 10/4/2005
It was happiness to come back and see updates! My computer has been down.

Once again, I have to say I am still hooked. I like how things with Blake and Caleb are slowly starting off.

The part with Brent, I do admit having to had narrowed my eyes at the screen. I have my heart with Blake and Caleb.

Hope to read more soon!
Kiyuna chapter 5 . 10/3/2005
Feck, guy.. this story is off to a great start, I feel like Blake and Caleb's cheerleader, and Nathan's pretty neat to, though it's obvious who he's referring to, I can't wait for your next update, you're a god.
K. T. Wood chapter 5 . 10/1/2005
Why would anyone hate Brent? I liked him. He was nice to lil' Caleb. Hehehe, Blake and Caleb like each other. I like this story. Please update again soon!
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