Reviews for Goodbye, Goodbye
Plinky chapter 1 . 10/14/2005
Wow, amazing poem. Really really lovely. I'm amazed. It's so beautiful!I really liked "the emptybox sort of way", and "No epliogue in that sky". Beautiful beautiful poem. Keep writing!
kit feral chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
Your poetry always floors me. It's so mature sounding. Mine is all teenage-y and angst-y and yours is just beautiful. I loved the lines "despite scarlet no's and famous last words (no, really)..." and "It's nearly raining, and I find I like it". Awesome. And I loved the repetition. This would be beautiful as a song with really soft piano music or something... anyway, great work as always, I really love it! .
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 9/18/2005
Yes i can relate to the feeling good work!

keep writing!