|Reviews for Goodbye, Goodbye|
| Plinky chapter 1 . 10/14/2005
Wow, amazing poem. Really really lovely. I'm amazed. It's so beautiful!I really liked "the emptybox sort of way", and "No epliogue in that sky". Beautiful beautiful poem. Keep writing!
| kit feral chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
Your poetry always floors me. It's so mature sounding. Mine is all teenage-y and angst-y and yours is just beautiful. I loved the lines "despite scarlet no's and famous last words (no, really)..." and "It's nearly raining, and I find I like it". Awesome. And I loved the repetition. This would be beautiful as a song with really soft piano music or something... anyway, great work as always, I really love it! .
| mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 9/18/2005
Yes i can relate to the feeling good work!