Reviews for My handsome beauty queen
the naked civil servant chapter 1 . 3/1/2006
jesus the summary just amazed me in its perfection. i can't, honestly can't, tell you how true this rang and how perfectly expressed it was, but.. surely you can guess? AH
citrus scented chapter 1 . 9/24/2005
love it, twisted and darkly humourus. truth? either way wicked poem, you describe it well.
eighteen hundred chapter 1 . 9/18/2005
I liked the sort of remote passion in this piece. Both good imagery and evoked feeling were included. Very nice.
Scully22 chapter 1 . 9/18/2005
very touching. very good. keep writing.
Lellida chapter 1 . 9/18/2005
This is hilarious and I love the style used. I love how she's just passively lying there, so very noncholant about the whole thing. It makes me giggle. Very nice.
lackluster chapter 1 . 9/18/2005
i love your wording, it adds so much to the imagery and overall feeling in the poem. it makes me smile.