Reviews for all the pieces we were without
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/26/2005
I like this.. especially the first couple of lines
born blue chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
oh, wow. buddy, i don't even know how it is possible for you to be so incredible at this. but you are.
Luneko chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
Strong imagery.

You know what image this poem put in my head? Golden-soft dreams choked by sharp fingers of black and left cold on the floor.

Dang, my description of your poem gave me inspiration for a poem of my own. Thanks!