Reviews for the spark in your eye
First-Chair-Flute chapter 1 . 5/6/2004
pretty good, both of u, tho u think ur whole, have a hole
u need Jesus 2 fill it
God luvs ya
go 2 him
he luvs u
repent of sin
he luvs u
u know he does
with all his heart
so ask him in
and never part
yu'll go 2 heaven
and see him there
welcomeing u in
ask him in, believe that Jesus died 4 u
and yu'll live 4 ever, in heaven
go 2 the Lord
he'll always luv u
no matter wat u do
no matter wat uve done go 2 him
repent all sin, (any)
accept him into ur heart
and u will never part
he luvs u, now luv hm in return
Jesus really did die 4 u, he really did rise from the dead
he really is the perfect and final sacrifice 4 sin, if u repent
vic romeo chapter 1 . 1/20/2002
Andy: *blinks* I agree. Not as depressing as usual. Good. My brother wants me to write something a little bit happier. *groan*
SweetGrape chapter 1 . 1/2/2002
Ragdoll chapter 1 . 4/25/2001
this is so sad... :( butr its really well written... euthanasia hmmmm... nope dont wanna think bout it right now... at the start it was like a love poem and that made the end bit al the more sad... but i spose its sorta happier at the very end
Carter Tachikawa chapter 1 . 2/8/2001
Incredible! I write songs too but they don't come out as good as this. I really, really liked it.
Angel chapter 1 . 2/6/2001
I really liked this. It was really powerful. It's true how true love can never really die and that when someone passes on, they're still with you in your heart. I really enjoyed this.