Reviews for Corner and Inferno
ViciousMan chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
I like the philosophical question posed by the poem - I like the question posed - Whether knowing the truth is worth it...
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
Good repitition and powerful thoughts.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/26/2005
hm very interesting... it definately made me think
AllyCred chapter 1 . 9/26/2005
i like it very descriptive and vivid...well done.

lots of loveAC
Moonjava chapter 1 . 9/22/2005
Oh, I like this. I found it very touching and truthful. I sometimes wonder about things like this. You put it all together in such a nice package to.
KonekOniko chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
this is...different. i don't know, i can't exactly word it. oh well, i like it, i'm in somewhat of a rush, but you're making real progress. oh well, see more from ya soon...
Kakyou Takashiro chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
dante without adieu...
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
your poetry always reminds me of haikus. I always get that feeling after reading your work that I'm reading a haiku. *sniffles* [is listening to ' The Ghost of You ' (My Chemical Romance), which makes her cry.] *shrugs* your writing always gives off that feeling of a haiku but not completely just, but that is what I love about reading your work. you improve with every poem and never give up! I admire you greatly for that strength. *nods*

ok, enough sparkly praise.

I have to say this is a fine poem, leaves an odd taste in my mouth but isn't at all horrid or awful but complete surreal and nearly dreamlike. though I only have one complaint, you repeated 'pondering' (goes for inferno too) which, to me, just sounded bad in the begining but I progress. the whole thing, overall, isn't bad or good, its better then OK but it is hard to place my finger on were I stand with this piece. I adore the lines - " What if you and I were a part of someone's dream? " & " What if this life as we know it, is just a lie? " & " Inferno..., the sizzling flames of truth. " - because they jus w. m e. a w a y. seriously, they are intelligioant & ( for the first two ) intriquing questions, which pique my own inteerest, and overall great flow.

again, I think you should try to not use the same words after each other. it is a little peeve of mine (which I break all the time, quilty as charged) but you don't have to. merely pointing it out. ;)

alright, I am very much happy to see you posting & honored to be on your reccomendation list. makes me all happy and smiley ... :) ok, keep writing & never give up you have great promise and need to give yourself more credit! *hugs* till your next poem ...

* noelle
Arichos chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
this is sort of a philisophical view point, and gets pretty deep. Awesome.
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
Well... this poem is definitely a change from the usual i like the words you chose, but the flow of the poem seems to halt quite abruptly at places, especailly at the beginning Good work!

keep writing!