Reviews for Trouble with Time
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
wow... time, it passes by so painfully lovely haiku

keep writing!
shinco chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
I know what it's like to relive your ill past... it hurts because either something happened to you, you did something bad to yourself, or you did something bad to someone else! :( This Haiku really shows the negativity of the misguided present and trying to comtemplate your future. But you know, the future, and even the present, can be wonderful! Take it from me, my life's a lot happier than it used to be! _
SeaVoi chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
Wow, I really like this one. Finally the Ti is back! :)