|Reviews for Tedious Excitement|
| carolyn.mcbride.3990 chapter 6 . 7/11
Funny, twisty and enjoyable
| grafiti rtk chapter 6 . 6/26/2006
This is really good. It reminds me a little of Roald Dahl's short stories and their twist endings. Only, on a much much smaller scale. I really liked The Forbidden Love. I definitely didn't see that one coming.
| Elf maiden-Peniel chapter 6 . 10/1/2005
one word sums this up
| Arkash chapter 6 . 9/29/2005
Great little piece!
Funny how we're bogged down in red tape.
Good Job! *_*
| Arkash chapter 5 . 9/29/2005
I loved this one.
Especially the phrase, "A pair of electrons danced a femtoscopic waltz." So scientifically poetic. *_*
| Arkash chapter 4 . 9/29/2005
Now write one about a girl shaving her legs.
| Elf maiden-Peniel chapter 5 . 9/26/2005
hm, interesting, seems a bit pointless but it is interesting
| Monev11235 chapter 4 . 9/21/2005
Haha, I love this one!
| Mbwun lazy chapter 4 . 9/21/2005
Nice. I particularly like the razor one.
| Monev11235 chapter 3 . 9/20/2005
Haha, I love this. Brilliant, man, brilliant.
| Alnitak Z Orion chapter 3 . 9/20/2005
Words surely have power, and they deceive, as you just proved it in these two little chapters.
Good Job, keep adding. *_*
| Alnitak Z Orion chapter 2 . 9/20/2005
Too bad for the cookie.
| Alnitak Z Orion chapter 1 . 9/20/2005
OK, let's see what you chose for this one.