Reviews for The hearts Swell
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 10/1/2005
wow, the last line did it all lovely language good work!

keep writing!
AllyCred chapter 1 . 9/26/2005
this is very deep...i really love the descriptions and the indepth imagery...well done.

lots of loveAC
account not in use chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
oh my. so sadly, sweetly bitter. wonderful, wonderful job.
Morbid Maxwell chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
Can you still taste my lust?

That caught my attention...just...wow. I don't know how to describe that line, I just absolutely loved it! XD Nyah!

Morbid Maxwell-I smell a sex scene on the horizon.
brynn amber chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
wow... amazing... completely flawless and excellently worded... i applaud you...