Reviews for Magpie
simpletonsgrin chapter 1 . 9/26/2005
Loved it. Reminded me of eighties punk or indie rock. Or brit- pop. Okay, the point is, something pretty groovy. I'm thinking Blur, or something of the like.

The second stanza was definately the better of the two, but a lot of things can look less brilliant in comparison to that.

Adding it to my favorites. Am in danger of adding you to my favorites.

-simpletonsgrace
The Ash File chapter 1 . 9/25/2005
ironically, while reading this poem i heard a magpie chirp from outside... though i'm still interested in why you named ur poem so.. [maybe i miss something] but a very deep poem, short, yet you are still able to convey your message successfully.. especially in the last line 'i am nothing but a whore' ash xox
account not in use chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
I feel trapped under the wieght of your words, having them hit me over and much beauty in this.
The Moribund Marionette chapter 1 . 9/20/2005
Hm...deep, yet...so simple.
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 9/20/2005
You have very much your own signature to your work; its interesting though how you call a beatnik artificial, but I guess in this day and age there's artificial faces in every genre of life. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.