|Reviews for Day One|
| RedHairedWriter chapter 1 . 10/10/2005
I like it, I don't really get it, but It's still, pleasent to read and intreguing.
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
| Pure Autumn chapter 1 . 10/3/2005
i cant really figure out this poem but i still like the use of language all your poems are so powerful - i wish i could do something just as good- :D
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/28/2005
this confused me because i cant figure out what you signed... other than that I like it though
| Valentine's Disease chapter 1 . 9/24/2005
i really like this, tho i dont know what it means to you.
| in theory chapter 1 . 9/24/2005
This reads like a selection of fancy food at a dinner party; you select the words which you relate to most. Nicely done.
| dooley creel chapter 1 . 9/23/2005
it must be those midnight cups of coffee, you certainly are prolific. This one is enjoyable, I like, ' part of myself that was living like a barbarian, boudless, until I signed on the dotted line." That's good, the sentiment of the phrase, as well as the choice of words. dc
| GLP chapter 1 . 9/23/2005
interesting; i esp. like the last 2 lines. iz x
| bemused scribbler chapter 1 . 9/23/2005
i like this a lot. The last two lines are really great. nice work.
| backseats on thursdays chapter 1 . 9/23/2005
psyco-analyzing I guess? lol, awesome work.
| catseyeview chapter 1 . 9/22/2005
| breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
Nice! I like how it was so full of meaning...keep on going!
| KwazyKandyPie chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
very interesitng, i like it! good job on this one. the ending is fantastic.-kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-
| lackluster chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
your poems always have so much meaning. i can read it again and again and discover something new. i really like that.
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 9/21/2005