|Reviews for flat|
| The Postscript chapter 1 . 10/28/2005
Hmm...you sound like my friend a bit. I know the feeling to...used to live with it everyday. Kind of disappointing, that the world is holding you back from everything you want, and also knowing in the back of your mind your thoughts also hold yourself back as well. Keep writing.
| not sure yet chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
very sweet, short, and expressive, like the metaphor, muchly nice
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/28/2005
I can totally relate to this.. I love the whoel flate line & that stanza... great job
| boundtobreak chapter 1 . 9/22/2005
Wow that was cool imagry with the soda being flat I couldn't have said it better myself,great job with this..BTW your welcome for the scare:P I had to write the review in a way that people could understand that I was only moving and not...you know..(The Scare) hehe well anyways I really liked this poem great job and KW
| Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 9/20/2005
Good work. Keep it up.