Reviews for You can't know
Laura chapter 1 . 9/20/2005
Wow...that is crazy good. I know how that feels, but it sucks doesn't it?
La Gitane chapter 1 . 9/20/2005
Ouch! ouch, that hurts, because it brings back the aching pain of wanting so badly to belong to whatever I was reading. I would literally grasp the pages of my book when I was younger, hoping that that if I held tight and wished hard enough, I'd be in the book, with the characters. Your poem, in its desperate lines, short and powerful, seem to recall that feeling... Those last two lines in particular - mere repitition, but still, very helplessly tragic.

Good work. Nice subject...