Reviews for Cinnamon Girl
cosmiclilly chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
"I would rather have her in a million pieces than not at all." I wish *I* had written this. XD This is just gorgeous. Really, truly.
CL Gingerich chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
Very interesting poem. I like the way you wrote it out and laid it down on the page. The shaping of the writing gave more meaning to the words. I really like it. Magnifico!
agirlnamed-aly chapter 1 . 11/16/2005
A bit dark and morbid, but I love it anyway. Favorite line:

"(I would rather have her in a million pieces)

(than not at all)"

That was the best.
til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton chapter 1 . 11/4/2005
Two words: Wonderfully Written
rhiannon32 chapter 1 . 10/26/2005
I simply adore your format. It's so creates many different ways to read the peom. WOW.
Nothing Profound chapter 1 . 10/24/2005
You have such a wonderfully unique style of writing, and this is so lovely. Well done, as always.
Luneko chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
So pretty-sad. I love love love the format.
elvenstorm chapter 1 . 10/3/2005
Wow... what else can I say. The name intrigued me but your writing is so beautiful. Love the bits in brackets they are just so passionate. Well done.
Relayer chapter 1 . 9/26/2005
That's quite chilling but tender at the same time.
a e i o u and sometimes y chapter 1 . 9/24/2005
interesting. sweet. mysterious. deep. and totally entrancing. cheers!
citrus scented chapter 1 . 9/24/2005
awesome, delicous and deep. this is just wicked, beautiful so gorgeously put together. and yes, i see what you mean on secondhandsuicide.
hoowdoideletethisaccount chapter 1 . 9/23/2005
agh that was gorgeous! I love love the last line! So perfect. This was short and sweet, and I enjoyed every line. The imagery was elegant. You did a great job!

And btw-a comment on your profile-it's lovely to see a Christian who is so proud of what they believe. :)
SkyeBlue4u chapter 1 . 9/22/2005
aww i wish a guy loved me like that
Kat-Renee Kittel chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
Oh wow that was good, and how you managed to visualize the poem-exceptional. So hard to do at this site. (and she would just smile through almond eyes- I really get the picture)..
linaeve chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
"I would rather have her in a million pieces/ than not at all" - striking and quite lovely. i enjoyed the overall feel of this, though i'm really sure i'm on the right track as to what it's about.
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