Reviews for Cinnamon Girl |
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![]() ![]() ![]() "I would rather have her in a million pieces than not at all." I wish *I* had written this. XD This is just gorgeous. Really, truly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting poem. I like the way you wrote it out and laid it down on the page. The shaping of the writing gave more meaning to the words. I really like it. Magnifico! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A bit dark and morbid, but I love it anyway. Favorite line: "(I would rather have her in a million pieces) (than not at all)" That was the best. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Two words: Wonderfully Written |
![]() ![]() ![]() I simply adore your format. It's so creates many different ways to read the peom. WOW. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You have such a wonderfully unique style of writing, and this is so lovely. Well done, as always. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So pretty-sad. I love love love the format. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... what else can I say. The name intrigued me but your writing is so beautiful. Love the bits in brackets they are just so passionate. Well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's quite chilling but tender at the same time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting. sweet. mysterious. deep. and totally entrancing. cheers! |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome, delicous and deep. this is just wicked, beautiful so gorgeously put together. and yes, i see what you mean on secondhandsuicide. |
![]() ![]() ![]() agh that was gorgeous! I love love the last line! So perfect. This was short and sweet, and I enjoyed every line. The imagery was elegant. You did a great job! And btw-a comment on your profile-it's lovely to see a Christian who is so proud of what they believe. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww i wish a guy loved me like that |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow that was good, and how you managed to visualize the poem-exceptional. So hard to do at this site. (and she would just smile through almond eyes- I really get the picture).. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "I would rather have her in a million pieces/ than not at all" - striking and quite lovely. i enjoyed the overall feel of this, though i'm really sure i'm on the right track as to what it's about. |