Reviews for For Allie
ValkyrieRavenfeather chapter 1 . 9/23/2005
Ooh, this was GOOD! I love the imagery you used. "Shiny white facade" caught my attention. I know exactly how you feel; I felt the same way about my best friend. EX-best friend, sorry. LOL.
Flies chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
Obviously you have been rubbed the wrong way and betrayed at the wrong time. The constant use of the word fake, repeating and repeating and continuing until it stirs into something worse, hatred, deceit and a vague description of what is now seen as an empty shell hiding the lies from onlookers. Very nice, even though for something in the midst of pain you want to hear more things along the lines of how bitter.
kdoll chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
it express very well a fake friendship, kinda poetic.