Reviews for Wake Up
Isca chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
"Let us die again." God, that line was beautiful! It's as if lovers wish to be revived, only to die again in each other's arms.

"Let us sing again." Stunning emotion and imagery here. Very melodic.

"Love again, the hide again." YES! Pure poetic genius here. So simple, and yet so powerful!

a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 3/29/2007
Wow, I quite like it.

Altho I think perhaps I would divide the longer lines into shorter ones.

But really, in all likelihood, that's just me.

Good work!
Flies chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
In line for it says "Let us by free", where I think you meant "Let us be free", but rather than that this is excellent. The vagueness seems to be like a lingering morning air which is very suiting for the slidish mood between death and sleeping.
ThisCut-UpAngel chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
This is beautiful. Painfully beautiful. Much applause.
Di chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
oh, i like that one