|Reviews for While We Weep|
| Flies chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
My, quite a dark way to get the juices flowing. But then again darkly's the way to start the day for many people, why not use it to get you started? The flow and ragged bumps of this seem sort of on cue/off cue, like something done between homework assignments. I quite like it, it's sort of like water poetry meets blood poetry. In an odd way, but still.
| Di chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
ya crazy emo kid :P
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
I like the intensity of this, keep up the good work.