|Reviews for Ocean's peace|
| Anna178 chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
Hey, wow, our birthdays are on the same day. Well happy birthday to you in 11 days too.
Anyway, the short lines in this really add depth. Simplicity is just as beautiful as complexity, if not more so.
I can relate to this well, and I love the reference to oceans, I live on the coast, and I think alot of them.
| AllyCred chapter 1 . 10/1/2005
i liked the ending very nice and powerful, but then also had a bit of terror and fear to it also...well done.
Lots of loveAC
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/28/2005
I love the whole car thing... beautiful poem.. I love the metaphor
| xoxoMizzatxoxo chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
Wow. Thats all I can say about this one. It was amazing. I loved it. Please read and review and thanks for all the reviews.
| karmakaze chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
I love how you compared hitting the water to a car accident. It makes it so much more disturbing, to me. I like the part where you say "Your blood flowing Faster Your heart beating Harder." Good work.