ah kiley you're amazing. and i just reviewed the previous poem but i was too busy yelling to be productive. it really truly was an awesome poem (as is this one, i like it a lot) i don't know what was about it.. something was really good. extra special. and i added it to my favorites, and i hate fictionpress for not letting me review twice in one poem.

really cool.. I love that last line.. its awesome

how do you do it, my friend? (i'm jealous) Anyway, you are incredible.. and this piece was.. i don't even know what to call it.. exquisite?

Wow. That is amazing. Good stuff.

A pretty awesome piece, in my opinion. Great description and ideas and such all just mixed in with a wonderful style. Nice work.