|Reviews for Trachea|
| naughtgreen chapter 1 . 9/22/2005
(My skin was dirt!)
I'm feeling you.
| classic violet chapter 1 . 9/22/2005
This was so beautiful and incredibly well done. By far, this is my favorite of your poems yet. It is so amazing. A true piece of poetry.
| GeorgeBailey chapter 1 . 9/22/2005
From my perspective, one of your gifts in writing certainly seems to be creating images that won't escape the readers' minds. Your images in Jesus Walked Across my Belly and others have stuck with me. And almost all the images in this one are amazing, and will remain with me for a while.
| Fabian Cortez chapter 1 . 9/22/2005
Beautiful work, your gift as ever shines through your writing as emotion and considered thought blend perfectly in almost everything your write.
I have a couple of new pieces up. I very much look forward to your thoughts _
| lerian chapter 1 . 9/22/2005
not your best but still very good.