|Reviews for funeral knell|
| emergency room romantic chapter 1 . 9/17/2006
for some reason, this made me think of abortion. just the dark, haunting, twisted atmosphere seems almost morbid, but it's still incredibly beautiful. and abortion makes me hurt, so this poem had an especially powerful effect on me. all of your writing is brilliant, but this has to be one of your best. and that last line - fuck, it's just incredible.
| riotmaker chapter 1 . 7/22/2006
gorgeous. twisted and sad.
i love the middle lines, "'he was my brother' she/ answers shivering. frightened-the baby kicks-" gorgeous.
| White is a Sin chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
For starters i did not know exactly what you were really saying in the review i wasn't sure if you liked it or hated it i know you said it was kinda good but i wasn't sure. Of course it was a critiscism. I wasn't offended in act i was really pleased to hear the truth and not just great work keep it up (some people do that in every review)
Now to your poem... I truly liked this and the inspiration was clear...after i read it...Job well done.
Thanks for all the reviews.
| the naked civil servant chapter 1 . 2/21/2006
oh jesus. lovelovelove. can't explain it. "her stomach pressed against crystal (so flat)" :
i may love you.
| kario chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
great job...thank you for the review on 'the death of a loved one' and i am pleased that you liked it. i do hope that you read the others that i have read, and spread the word about my poems, while i do to yours...thanks, and this poem in dead is great just as others that you have wrote, they're not crap! they are great, very excellent. kario
| les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 12/16/2005
Unusual and complicated, yet, simply put. I love the approach in here, and it reminds me of haunting thoughts that leave you breathless, including a pregnant lady. Hmm. Anyways, great work.
| Decollage chapter 1 . 12/10/2005
I can't claim understanding, but my reaction is close enough to me to describe with some mild clarity.
Fear. And I love you for it.
| Plinky chapter 1 . 10/28/2005
Wow, great poem, again!
I love your layout - it's really original.
I don't know what to say! Lovely description - nice style, it's kind of sparse. (I don't like that word but it says what I want to say.)
| pornographic priestess chapter 1 . 10/20/2005
| hey maria chapter 1 . 10/13/2005
So creepy. Reminds me of all the nightmares that leave you sweating and gasping in the night, made even more vivid because they were in slow motion. An incredible piece.
| someday-i-will chapter 1 . 10/12/2005
Sorry! Been really behind on reveiws, anyway this is an amazing piece..as always _
| Bleeding Air chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
I love your poetry. I love your style. It's so simple yet complicated at the same time, and it's really interesting to follow. And your poetry. . . always so morbid. I love it.
This is so unusual. My thing. I'm off to read what I haven't yet.
| destinee ariarti chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
how perfectly morbid and dark
I love that you keep it cryptic enough to require thought, but not so much as to completely elude the reader
| morbid-scribbles chapter 1 . 10/6/2005
I like it! Thanks for the review.
| this is my love for you chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
That was slightly disturbing, but disburbing is beautiful.