|Reviews for High School|
| luv me like no other chapter 1 . 11/27/2007
i am in agreement with this poem.
| she smolders chapter 1 . 9/17/2007
This could be my life right now. Take care.
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
Supurb assessment. Captures the totality succintly. MD:77.
| Kissing Concrete chapter 1 . 5/14/2007
i like it- shows the loneliness and hardships of high school and how we are discovering who we are in such few words- nice
| Disturbing Enigma chapter 1 . 2/10/2006
So true... good poem...
| the naked civil servant chapter 1 . 1/12/2006
aw. this was sort of nice, because it felt so very naive and helpless, and... unaware? i don't know... it just really seemed to encapsulate not depression, but a lack of direction. excellence.
| Jo Madden chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
This is so true! High school is full of people who want to be 'the popular' girl or the 'perfect' boy. It's so annoying. Please keep it up.
| hmich176 chapter 1 . 11/29/2005
Nice poem...just a reminder of how high school was.
| Gilee7 chapter 1 . 11/14/2005
I like reading the longer poems by you because they're like going on this wild mind-trip where I feel like I'm falling the entire time I'm reading. With these shorter ones, I'm just left wanting more. That was the case here. I liked this one, though. It's clearly a female poem, and I'm a dude, but I still kinda halfway related, I guess. It made me think of my ex-girlfriend and her love for all those magazines like Seventeen that litter her bedroom floor.
| Temptd chapter 1 . 11/13/2005
This poem was very well written...you described 4 yrs in 10 lines..great job
| nanashi-04 chapter 1 . 10/24/2005
High school. in 10 lines we've experienced 4yrs. unbelievable. Faithless Juliet, Ms.278. You are a poetic Goddess.
| ACCOUNT NO LONGER ACTIVE 1 chapter 1 . 10/22/2005
So true and you admit to being caught in it, which is helps the rest of us relate to it. Really captures and escribes simply the fake, plastic world of high school.
| amethyst64 chapter 1 . 10/19/2005
this got me thinking, really. and i agree, everything's true. i'm still in high school now so i can relate. ;) i like your poems, i'm adding you up to my faves. _
| this is my love for you chapter 1 . 10/13/2005
This reminds me how it is thought that certain stages of high school are a "rite" of passage... something that everybody goes through whilst trying to find themselves... but anyway, i like your play of words in this peom.
| Debbie-chan chapter 1 . 10/8/2005
Since I'm not in high school yet, I have no idea whether this is true or not. Nice metaphor. I like it.