Reviews for Beyond The Dream
Mssy Ms chapter 1 . 1/3/2012
You can defiantly see the improvement you have made since you were younger. I think my newest favorite of yours is Calendula. It is very sing song.

Faye-"not clammed, 'claimed' and as if neccesary to say this was another shrort horrific attention cry. You want to sicken someone, dont bother killing yourself, overpower their senses with this garbage, they will certainly wish to die themselves, powerful stuff here...hehe. -Faye"

And it is not "neccesary" it is necessary and not "shrort" but short. The N in "not" at the beginning should be capitalized. Your first sentence should have read something like "Not 'clammed', and as if it* is necessary to say this was another short and* horrific attention cry." Next you missed the ' in "dont", and that entire sentence is a run on.

My advice is that you stick to working on your own improvement before coming up to someone else. You spelling and grammar is no better than hers. What is sick is that you would right a so claimed "review" calling someone's work trash. You have no idea how she was feeling when she wrote this. How dare you attack someones character? It is harassment and a load of crap. You should feel ashamed of yourself.

Mssy
Faye Coon chapter 1 . 9/23/2005
not clammed, 'claimed' and as if neccesary to say this was another shrort horrific attention cry. You want to sicken someone, dont bother killing yourself, overpower their senses with this garbage, they will certainly wish to die themselves, powerful stuff here...hehe. -Faye