|Reviews for Movin'|
| Lady Glass chapter 1 . 9/23/2005
I don't know if this was the intended picture, but I have this great image in my head of a boy clutching a suitcase in one hand, thirty bucks in the other, heading onto this old dusty bus, only it's all 1950's style. It's great, I love that image. I don't really care if that was the intended picture, because it's too cute to let go of!
Great poem, I quite enjoyed it. Made me feel kind of warm and fuzzy inside. I don't know why, though. It's weird...
| Chandra-Moon chapter 1 . 9/23/2005
Some of the lines were very nice and had great imagery...some of them were a bit cliche (gonna spread my wings, and a few other lines...kinda reminded me of the "we're moving on up" theme from the jefferesons.)
But a nice poem, overall. Keep writing.