Reviews for Standing in the Rain
Unready chapter 1 . 11/27/2005
with few words this poem accomplishes what other poets simply can't

good work

Unready
s m e l l . o f . r a i n chapter 1 . 10/15/2005
...blink I really was not expecting that. The ending contrasts a lot from the calm/ tranquility of the beginning. I like it- twists are always good. )

Nicely written.
Thorn's-girl chapter 1 . 10/15/2005
This is amazing.

"lie to meand you pull me backlook deeply into my eyes with your deep beautiful brown eyes and sayI love you and always will"

You've captured something here, and its beautiful and sad and is going to haunt me the rest of the night.
Moonjava chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
This is sweet in a nice way. Great poem.
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 10/1/2005
AW... the rainfall always seems to bring out the sweet part of people good poem~

keep writing!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/30/2005
i like this.. i can completely relate... very sweet & well written
AllyCred chapter 1 . 9/29/2005
i like it...very good expression of emotion...the line "Lie To Me" really makes me remember stuff in my past...well done this is great...i love it.

lots of love~AC~
tiggershan87 chapter 1 . 9/26/2005
Very good. Strong feelings in it. Keep up the good work.
Infinity Plus One chapter 1 . 9/25/2005
Very powerful. I like it. :)
queenvixta chapter 1 . 9/24/2005
This is so beautiful and touching. Lovely piece! Thanks for all your reviews! QueenVixta
CielNombreUnDeesse chapter 1 . 9/23/2005
woow thats deep i read a fanfic of Inuyasha where rin asked sesshomaru to lie to her and he told her the same thing

~ Heaven