|Reviews for When in Rome, Shun Rome|
| HikaruWinter chapter 55 . 1/7/2013
My brain is confused...
| HikaruWinter chapter 8 . 1/6/2013
Indeed. It IS the gender. I would know, I'm female and I don't make sense to myself...
| alexisrenee chapter 80 . 3/1/2012
That is... just amazing. It got REALLY confusing at around 50/60 chapters, but the way it's written it all kinda works out in the end.
The only issue I have is that Mirielle's hands REALLY seem to just appear and disappear... It's kinda confusing, because a couple of times you refer to her hooks as "hands" and it just... added to the whole hectic feel of those chapters. This is SUCH a well thought out story though.
And I absolutely love how Kai turned into a girl in the end! It's absolutely perfect! He always seemed like he would be a better girl than a guy anyway.
But then again I'm a girl, so that may just be my prejudice speaking there -laughs-. I really can't wait to read the continuation of Kai's story. It feels like it's just getting started! You really broke it off in a good spot. Usually with series, the way they end the books annoys me, because it's so unresolved! This way you know it's not finished, you know there's more to come, and what's basically going to happen, but you also have a certain amount of resolution going on there.
Good luck with the writing!
| alexisrenee chapter 52 . 3/1/2012
Oh my... Really great developments, but this has been a totally confusing couple of chapters. I think that may just be me though. I'm having trouble keeping track of who has lost what limb/function.
| Gator-aide chapter 7 . 1/31/2011
o.o no blood test required...just sample of hair or nail would be enough. but all is good! :D I like this story very much
| Rayfield Noland chapter 80 . 6/22/2009
I've probably started reading this story a few days after first signing up on this site (so far a few years now), and i finally finished it early tis morning. This story is awesome. That's all i have to say about that.
| SSJ5Goku chapter 77 . 5/26/2009
"Though I have a feeling you'll find the later more difficult than the former. Take longer, too."
You mean latter. The second sentence is also screwed up. etc.
| Kannon chapter 80 . 3/7/2009
wonderful plot and story, i'm still not sure how i feel about kai being a girl now... i kinda wish she would go back to being a 'he'. XD
| Casey Drake chapter 80 . 2/28/2009
Excellent. -grinning- I remember when this story began... -nod- sweet.
Over and out,
| Casey Drake chapter 78 . 2/14/2009
-steepled fingers- interesting...
Oh, cool, new character!
| thar nyme chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
Great story. I liked it. But the only thing i disagree with is that im not sure that that's how the girlfriend's mom and brother would react.
| Casey Drake chapter 74 . 1/20/2009
Oh rock on. You're really good at the twists.
| Casey Drake chapter 73 . 1/4/2009
Oh nice... This is going to be intriguing...
| Casey Drake chapter 72 . 12/22/2008
-rubs hands eagerly- Ooh! More fun!
Let's see, a female humanoid dragon... probably Tarl. -laughing- I love how everything is coming together!
| Richard Mortara chapter 70 . 12/4/2008
This is an absolutly amazing story that i just kind of...stumbled upon. I really think you have a way of connecting with your readers on a level most authors can't even begin to fathom. I just hope you keep it up and i'm going to keep you on my favorites list in case you come up with anything else, i'm sure i'd like them.