Reviews for Away
Electric Blue Eyeliner chapter 1 . 10/22/2005
OMG this poem is realli realli good!

"But no -You are arrogantYou have too much prideThat is why I laughAs I watch you cry."

i like that part!

not only does it rhyme but its realli cool

my poems compared to urs r...not that good

lol

okay now to another poem that catches my attention

lol
tiggershan87 chapter 1 . 9/28/2005
Thats good very strong emotions in it.