|Reviews for Away|
| Electric Blue Eyeliner chapter 1 . 10/22/2005
OMG this poem is realli realli good!
"But no -You are arrogantYou have too much prideThat is why I laughAs I watch you cry."
i like that part!
not only does it rhyme but its realli cool
my poems compared to urs r...not that good
okay now to another poem that catches my attention
| tiggershan87 chapter 1 . 9/28/2005
Thats good very strong emotions in it.