Reviews for Bus Ride
Electric Blue Eyeliner chapter 1 . 10/22/2005
i like this one too (i like all ur poems but still)

its so sad

i feel bad

for the boy in the front

and it rhymes!

i love rhymin

most peo cant do rhymin

but u can!
tiggershan87 chapter 1 . 9/28/2005
Thats very good. Keep it up.
Nearly There chapter 1 . 9/24/2005
I love this! Its very true to life, I'm sure many of us can relate to this!
Broken Telephone chapter 1 . 9/24/2005
lol cute! Awesome job, dude!
The Postscript chapter 1 . 9/24/2005
Cute...the flow was a little ridgid, but nothing big. I admire poets who tell a story within their poetry in such a natural way. Keep writing. God bless, Katja.