i like this one too (i like all ur poems but still)

its so sad

i feel bad

for the boy in the front

and it rhymes!

i love rhymin

most peo cant do rhymin

but u can!

Thats very good. Keep it up.

I love this! Its very true to life, I'm sure many of us can relate to this!

lol cute! Awesome job, dude!

Cute...the flow was a little ridgid, but nothing big. I admire poets who tell a story within their poetry in such a natural way. Keep writing. God bless, Katja.