Reviews for My Desire
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/30/2005
the ending was unexpected... I love the beginning because i can totally relate
Maxwell K chapter 1 . 9/27/2005
I love the last two lines, at first its all about the narrator of the poem, then it mentions "you" "watch the world go" You yearn to live, when the rest dread to take a risk. You said in a review im your hero, im no hero, im just another meager man, no more special than anything, your my hero. But don't forget it is impossible to scrape the cealing, on account the wild soul sees no limit to ones imagination.:)(though my seeing this, you already figured that out:))
A Face Worth Remembering chapter 1 . 9/25/2005
Again, very nice twist.
AmbroseMaximilien chapter 1 . 9/24/2005
It's a very cute little poem (that's probably not the correct term, but I'm a little out of it :P)

Don't we all feel like that sometimes? Leave those that don't dare to take a risk behind!

Keep writing! -
Theory Of The 4th Dimension chapter 1 . 9/24/2005
I can relate...this is what dreams and ambition would be if they were put together in a poem. The flow is also good. Sweet piece.
12345678912356789deletedelete chapter 1 . 9/24/2005
'I want to know all the secrets/But still love the mysetries'I liked this, it has an atmosphere to it that I can't quite describe
hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 9/24/2005
i like the tree tops thing...very original! good job