Reviews for Loneliness
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/30/2005
I know how taht feels.. I could help you eliminate the double spacing if you want
A Face Worth Remembering chapter 1 . 9/25/2005
Great poem. You're right, there are things worse then just being alone. oh, 'For to feel lonely does no mean' does not? great job. -Elli
ACCOUNT NO LONGER ACTIVE 1 chapter 1 . 9/24/2005
Very good descritions, the whole feel of it was great. loved it.
Spootasia Tomoe chapter 1 . 9/24/2005
very well done, very true and very good imagery to support the message. this poem was incrediably written. you have a remarkable talent for making words fit into the shapes you want them too so that others can see them aa well. thank you for sharing this with us. it's a poem one can learn from.