Reviews for Lost Without You
Anon chapter 10 . 5/20/2012
Kuch kuch hota hai? O Gosh. Seriously?
outsidersgirl chapter 1 . 12/19/2007
this is good
siddika chapter 44 . 2/4/2007
Strangely Natural chapter 44 . 10/26/2006
Very intense and grueling on the emotions I must say! But there's still hope thank goodness, if only Claire could find Rahul and tell him she loves him while they're both sober and talk seriously about their options and how to precede. But how will Rahul react if/when Claire tells him she aborted their child willingly because she was behaving so cowardly in a moment of panic...oh the possiblities. Overall great story brilliantly realistic; big applause!
storyspinstress22 chapter 19 . 7/12/2006
That was a bit of a start there! I really like this story, hm very intriguing. I was reading along and then the first thing I see at the beginning of ch 19. is my name. Spelled all right and everything. Do I Know You? haha just kidding, nice story anyway!
Still Pretending chapter 22 . 4/26/2006
In the last chapter, you wrote something about queque. What is that?
Lightning Storm chapter 44 . 4/25/2006
Hey, I just finished your story and I loved it. The whole thing was amazing, and I can't believe you go so little reviews for it. You deserve more.

The only problem in this would be the grammer and spelling mistake. Other than that the story line is great. I can't wait to read the sequal, and your other stories.
Still Pretending chapter 11 . 4/12/2006
There is onee mistakein this very good story, you keep saying 'he said, she said' If the reader knows there are only two people talking to only each other, you don't have to spcify, just skip lines. Plus, I was so happy when I found out this was set in Australia. I heard a lot of slang and I was guessing in the whole thing. I'm such a loser , but I was happy to be right. Not like you care.
Still Pretending chapter 4 . 4/12/2006
This story is really good so far... and I'm on chapter 4! It's obvious that you can really write. Keep up the good work!
Peach8321 chapter 4 . 3/20/2006

I thought I'd give your story a try but I cannot read any longer. I think you need to add more description to things such as her outfit and the dinner. That will make it more real to the readers. Also, most of your story seems to be just talking. You could describe the scenes more so that it would become more involving. I think you have a good plot and good luck with your writing.
Swimmer07 chapter 44 . 3/15/2006
that was such a wonderful story. Now I really wish I had read this before I read part two, I am so on Rahul's side now :D
Swimmer07 chapter 9 . 3/14/2006
I think Rahul swapped the papers
Swimmer07 chapter 8 . 3/14/2006
aw so sad
Swimmer07 chapter 7 . 3/14/2006
No! he can't go
Swimmer07 chapter 6 . 3/14/2006
I loved this chapter! The best so far! I was worried he was seriously hurt.
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