Reviews for Deadly Pill
Nightwitch87 chapter 1 . 9/25/2005
Nice job, I like the emotion your poem conveys. I don't like poems that rhyme, usually, but this one is quite well-written.
xoxoMizzatxoxo chapter 1 . 9/25/2005
So sad. Please read and review.
Winter Reflections chapter 1 . 9/25/2005
this is so beautiful! i always think suicidal poems like this are pretty! i have jsut written a lot of them i guess.

anyway, i love it! the rhyme seems a little bit forced in places, but i still rather it the way it is!


(R&R my stuff sometime _)
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 9/25/2005
This is well written. Good work. Keep writing! _

neko chapter 1 . 9/25/2005
not bad i liked it